amber sunset (Dark Stranger inspired senryu)

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Open Poetry #37

amber sunset (Dark Stranger inspired senryu)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-02-18 08:42 PM

warm amber sunset

glows me from within and out

Dark Stranger’s shadow

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-02-18 09:12 PM

Not bad Kacy, not bad at all...

tracie66
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Australia

2 posted 2006-02-18 09:43 PM

wonderful - you're the keeper of the senryu
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Martie

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3 posted 2006-02-18 09:46 PM

Inspired indeed!! and well done!!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2006-02-18 09:49 PM

thanks! DS poetry always warms me

Rainbowdust
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Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2006-02-18 10:25 PM

Hi Kacy, liked this! Reminded me of a line from Romeo and Juliet:
Ah me! how sweet is love itself possess'd,
When but love's shadows are so rich in joy!
Thanks for your comments on my poetry too.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

The Lady
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The Southwest

6 posted 2006-02-18 10:45 PM

Simply lovely Kacy.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

7 posted 2006-02-19 12:35 PM

Ain't that just like a stranger!!
Enjoyed the shadow play, Kacy~

You did good!!

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