Open Poetry #37 |
what one must do |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Everyone has to do his/her own thing. It’s what one MUST do." That’s what you said as you headed for bed, and you were right. Today, I shall not do what you want to do. Instead, I am moving ahead, persuing my dream, in my private time frame. I must do my own thing before the final bell does ring. For whom it tolls, might be for me, as early as before dawn’s light, you see. And ‘twould not be right for me to have spent my final moment doing your thing, not mine. Not that your special thing isn’t wonder-full. It’s just that it belongs to you, not me. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy "It’s just that it belongs to you, not me." It's very important to know that. |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really liked this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks ladies! this is something written long ago just a slight update |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Enjoyed very much. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Now, isn't THAT the truth! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful! Well done! I enjoyed this very much. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yep....that Truth! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woo!!! Sassy; I love it and then He created the horse... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I'm forever blowing bubbles for someone else! LOL This is so appealing! May you always have time to fulfil your dreams. ~ Karen ~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
after years of one who controlled all yes i now sit and do my thing be it dream write create or watch movies till i find what i want instead of yours or eat what i want go where i want and especially feel what i feel just to be me before i go. great write My spirit will rise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
nicely said Kacy - touches home ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This sounds like a fork in the road moment..hope you chose wisely Kacy..thank you for the words.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this poem |
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