Open Poetry #37 |
hold on |
poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
Tears in your eyes, blinking away mistakes you've made. Droplets falling from your cheeks. The memory of past. A tissue wipes away the fears of knowing you're not there To help her. She's holding on to nothingness : grasping for air - but falling. She can't hold on. Too far gone. You know it's over now, but the pain's still there ; more than ever. You left her : but she can't hold on not on her own. She dares not to scream and wake her surroundings Everywhere reflections of memory - and letting go. She didn't hold on. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Leanne~ this is so sad, such heartfelt longing and loss ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sad.. but nicely written.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Heartbreaking leanne... and wonderfully crafted. |
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