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Open Poetry #37

The Great Unknown.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2006-02-17 12:12 PM

I fall and fall
through time until senses
leave and i am like
a planet in a
yawning universe of light,
sprinkled across blue-black backgrounds
of deepening shades.
Passing through tunnels of
white light, falling
into utopian worlds
that could only be
the glories of heaven.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

1 posted 2006-02-17 08:18 PM

Hmmm...I felt like your poem
the day I was born......into
the great unknown...a little
planet feeling lost in the
darkness...hmm and I still
feel lost.. lol
Beautiful work...

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