Open Poetry #37 |
Upon a Summers Breeze |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Upon the Summer Breeze Upon a summer breeze there cast An odor fingering the past It stirred my mind illusions will Promises of desires fill It warmed my heart a wrap of lace A moment of a passing grace A banquet I could not deny A lover’s coup within a sigh My senses caught the breeze in pull I had the sense of three bags full And melt into that mood of play To stay with me the whole of day And in this fall of pantomime My life went back a moment’s time To play once more a mellow fife A banquet of my former life Tranquility had slipped a notch And offered me a do, not watch |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm ready for summer to...but I think a different summer then your describing although both are very nice, as are your words... smiles and huggles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I am smiling here too, as you made me recall something my Dad said to me once--he said: "I used to wake up, and if I felt bad, I was surprised. Nowadays, I wake up, and that's a surprise. The pain becomes inconsequential after a time..." We love you sy. :kis: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I read you dream, beautiful. serenity, What you dad said is very true. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Enjoyed the warm breeze, but once again it is your message that lingers long. Thank you Sy for your words and your wisdom, they so often set my thinking straight, or straighter as the case may be. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A sweet reply, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your words leave an embrace that lingers eternaly and forever gives warmth and smiles My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you for your kind reply. |
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