Open Poetry #37 |
discarded charments |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
was I vulgar to your eyes sweet whiskey when I bared my wrong side out to your three fingers of salvation and did you water then like an ice cube melting into warm butter helpless to resist the humor of how richard rode proud on his handsome pony for the weavers of shrouds that used pink string dirges loose stitched in their patterns so the tattoos would still show when the movie people came to do their news at some eleven of how you netted another one without even hooklineandsinkers but with just a gothy label from some of your discarded charments _____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-17-2006 09:22 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
was I vulgar to your eyes sweet whiskey when I bared my wrong side out to your three fingers of salvation how could you be vulgar to anyone's eyes? tell ya what, if she thinks so, let me atther... Hugs and Happy Friday thanks for such enriching visuals... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms LeeJ..you always are there to lend a pair of everlasts..thanks lady |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I didn't know you had a wrong side either...and btw? y'GOT me! I looked up charments. I must need more coffee. Normally I get ya, DS. Sheesh. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yes serene one..normally you GOT me..thanks lady friend |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Nah, I dont think you were vulgar to her eyes but maybe strangely dark from inside out.... lol....just kiddin... I enjoyed reading this poem branded with originality... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms airG...thank you for keeping the drapes drawn on this one..(grin) you smile me lady friend |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
how could dark be vulgar Just sheds some light every now and then My spirit will rise |
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