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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-02-17 12:25 PM

it’s not yet time to go
I whisper
and she graces me with her smile
how do you know

have the stars left the night sky
has the breeze left the trees to sleep
has my heart finished its steady beat

she changes the world for me
low ivory light
haunts the air
stars claim the sky as their own
rain falls as soft tears
warm salty
carved white mist builds a shrine to her
her hand blesses my face
her voice embraces my soul
and when it is time to go
the place where she is not
howls with emptiness

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

1 posted 2006-02-17 04:52 AM

Very touching.

Love the first part most.

'it’s not yet time to go
I whisper
and she graces me with her smile
how do you know

have the stars left the night sky
has the breeze left the trees to sleep
has my heart finished its steady beat'

And the rest too.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2006-02-17 05:26 AM

Poetry written from the core

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2006-02-17 06:09 AM

so hauntingly beautiful - loved this

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-17 06:57 PM

Thank you for your kind words FNG, RedStoneEB and Tracie!

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

5 posted 2006-02-17 08:12 PM

Yeah, when she is not around, it is
as if the sun suddenly disappeared
behind a cloud, leaving the world dark
and full of shivers. She is the essence
in the universe, the life of the party.
I really, really love this poem.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-02-17 10:27 PM

You've sure got that right Air Goddess.

Thank you!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-02-18 10:51 AM

This poem fills my heart withh beauty.. I love it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2006-02-18 10:54 AM

Lady,

this has certainly found a niche
in my soul...

thank you for the tender of it.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-02-18 04:27 PM

Thank you Page and Karilea for your lovely words.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2006-02-18 05:14 PM

thanks, these words were much needed
no, its not time to go.

bless you. god sends messages in the strangest ways. reminds you of your journey.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2006-02-18 05:17 PM

Oh MGROVES... I do not know what to say to you. Big hugs.

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