poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,
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2006-02-16
06:49 PM
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i stare deep within you breathing into your soul absorbing life you took from me back then.
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dansgirl
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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posted
2006-02-16
07:41 PM
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Big sigh...
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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posted
2006-02-16
11:53 PM
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Wow! Powerful little punch to this. Awesome. TD
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
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posted
2006-02-17
12:08 PM
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Oh yes! So well done leanne!
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
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posted
2006-02-18
11:34 AM
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bump~*~
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Nightshade
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
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posted
2006-02-18
11:44 AM
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~wonderful~ hugs, ChrisPoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. ~Carl Sandburg
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garysgirl
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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posted
2006-02-18
11:45 AM
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So beautiful!!! Thank you so much for sharing this lovely!! Hugs, Ethel
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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
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posted
2006-02-18
12:15 PM
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A painful cinquain, poetry queen. Looking back reminds me of my own mistakes, and how vulnerable I can be. What I didn't see back then is so obvious to me, so I'd rather not look,
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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posted
2006-02-18
01:36 PM
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a wonderful cinquain..I love them..
M
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