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Open Poetry #37
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poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
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england,
0 posted 2006-02-16 06:48 PM


i wait for your call
to tell me that it's over;
you love me no more.
i cant bear the pain ive caused
ive broken your heart - again.
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1 posted 2006-02-16 06:50 PM

Poignant Tanka Poetry Queen. Very well written!
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