Open Poetry #37 |
Floating By Dreams. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Midnight in your mind, sunshine in round and round dreams, rising and falling from the dream consciousness, but not wanting to leave the sky and ocean scenes, blasting to my inner brain creases. Spellbound by the dulcet lilting, lapping, plashing waves, curling crystal; tidelining sands of crushed white powder, blinding under amber beaming sunlight. Then off out to sea, atop beryl watered shoals, a yacht sailed into my view. White sailed, mast lustrous in the hot beating sun. Long days languid, measuring their beauty by the cerise clouds, like islands floating in a sky sprawled to the steps of heaven and eternity. Rocked to sleep by the soothing waves to wake in a new world of reality, mundane, but easily as important to my loving soul. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
floating on a big "fluffy" cloud..... Dreams give hope~ ~ARh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully articulated, loved the feeling and visuals it gave me... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
such wonderful imagery! Loved the last bit the very best (in this supposed to say "splashing"?: "plashing waves") enjoyed.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
ARH thank you for your reply..GR Lee...Thank you for your nice reply..GR DG...thank you for your words...no ''plashing'' is what i meant to say..see dictionary.com.. Plashing = the sound of light splashing..but i can see where you thought it may be wrong..thank you for noticing...GR.. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! this is an exceptional write - very visual and most enjoyable ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ok..I'm with you now.. "plashing" I've been edumacated hugs, g |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
beautiful imagery |
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