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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Blue Words your words could have saved me surrounded me and covered me in warm kisses and healed wounds far past places under my skin but pencils don’t write as much as they use to and phones sit quiet waiting for the other to dial who is it to say they were right and who is to say wrong and who will say sorry who really cares who was right and what does it all matter anyway when something said is better than all this damn silence I do remember a time when words brought us together and now all they do is echo the gulf just some words cut out |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
silence calls to us in this and I'm wishing you both surrender to the moment, forgetting what is now past. Wise right |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lots of questions...answers to search for..a good write..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I always like your stuff...this is no exception, it is excellent! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I do remember a time when words brought us together and now all they do is echo the gulf You write ache so beautifully!!! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
My God, that was a long breath, lol. I love love love this. The truth, the passion, it is so fluent in speech and style. You have an immense gift most would kill for. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wow ms slick..just wow |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I do remember a time when words brought us together and now all they do is echo the gulf" Love this poem.... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bump very good bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How is it that words can be so powerful, so gentle and caring, so honest and true if you will. And yet so meaningless!!! Great poem, it's always good to read you Helen~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, blue words......but written with such heart! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this has so much ache in it. I hope the communication is found again. Silence hurts so badly at times. Hugs, Ethel |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This makes me hurt. Remember though, sometimes distance is only distance, and sometimes it is partly an illusion caused by things that loom too big in the foreground. The hard part is that it's almost impossible to tell them apart. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Your words always comfort me for I know whether they are happy or sad they are from the heart and that adds so much more to the meaning of your poems |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You write so well Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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