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Open Poetry #37

Touch Of The Black Sun

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

0 posted 2006-02-15 12:07 PM

Its piercing, Its perverted,
It’s a guns ‘n roses concert.
Its driving me to extreme aggression.
Woodstock It was annoying, the music,
It’s a hippy heaven.
Those drugs, they’re evil, Them drug possess
Wicked powers.
Its like witch craft on a cold winter night.
Its bad….. Temporary problem solvers
Designed to create new problems.
The hippy wizards they smoke their weed
while placing squares of acid on their
Blackened tongues.
The happiness they feel
Its nothing more then psychological hypnosis.
What have we all become?
Born as sinners digging the pit of sin or
building a way out either way
The evil we possess is great or small.
A universe that is perverse and evil.
Earth is a giant correctional facility
That will determine our sentence.
Some goto another place full of love
And others crumble like my cigarette
Pack and get tossed into the camp fire.
I am injured by my past now I must beg
To be forgiven.

I wrote this about 10 years ago and found it recently while searching for a letter from the President. Found all the drafts but one so this may or may not make much sence.

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

1 posted 2006-02-15 12:58 PM

makes me think of freaking out during a nic fit when my smokes have fallen behind the couch, and then apologizing 10 minutes later to everyone I might have freaked out at.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-02-15 04:36 PM

"Those drugs, they’re evil, Them drug possess
Wicked powers."

Nicely done ManOfWolves. Did you find the letter?

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

3 posted 2006-02-15 04:43 PM

I know exactly how you feel about nicotine fits. I end up sleeping longer just so Im not hunting out tobacco.

As for the other question, I did not find the letter but found the envelope. Found some old collage images I put together too.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-02-15 05:42 PM

"Earth is a giant correctional facility
That will determine our sentence."

So right on...deep read.

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