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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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where whale songs whisper a moment’s love in spring, summer, winter or fall azure color rolls the rise to smile to cry to cherish time to worship lilacs of the mind impersonal, yet, spiritual intimacy devotional path of love, indestructibly one small insights of delicate waves sensory ribbons of youth’s charade absorbs consciousness vehemently until there is a play of sensory where earth & sky dream an ocean’s roar to a lover’s island world in metaphoric prose reflected hopes wielding a topic of oneness of mind a wellness which is softly amplified so sweetly nested in utterance sublime realms henceforth retire things of nothingness within a mother’s bosom liquid wild flowers transforms suffering into teachings focused... undisturbed, inner peace sails the sea so tirelessly like a child’s imagination grasping with innumerable fingers half-hushed infinity feel deeply each whisper~ each breath~ of you and me...~ of waves, spiritualist prolific inspiring the poet the sea, the sea ohhhh noon time light which whispers gently, awakening emotion the soul's final devotion fragrance of all thoughts profound a thing of higher sense the call which penetrates a soul, to reason the smile of sea, of sea where thine sun’s paradise might be, one day waiting with song of ocean birds who never long a hundred thousand grains of sand blaring sounds of airy love in groves of island grasses & song [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-15-2006 10:58 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lovely Lee, good to see you this morning~ Love your romantic side~ ~ARh  by the way thanks for the compliments ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
some places I want to go just for a few hours at least inside your mind would be one of them enjoyed it lady |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
LeeJ... A masterpiece. Such that the emotions consumed me. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X Q U I S I T E !! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So picturesque; a melody for sea and shore. This is beautiful poetry LJ. JL   |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
I wanna go there..into your poem.. and discard reality for a little while.. Thanks for sharing |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You take us to the places of dreams and wonder Lee..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Nice to see your romantic side. But always knew you had one. Good morning sweet. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"lilacs of the mind" What a line! Your work is admirable LeeJ. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful expressed images , yes the sea , in which I always feel an affinty , the ocean seems to draw out every emotion Hope |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Ah ! bliss ALL is glorious |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have read this several times, and I have a special fondness for whale songs--and yes there's a story behind that--but I get distracted by it, but know, dear lady, that I equate it with angels singing. Your mind is a groovy place these days, in other words.  |
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