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Open Poetry #37

silence rings

ghettogurl13
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 11

0 posted 2006-02-14 03:02 PM

no need for words,

silence rings,

a soft senstual melody carries itself through the air,

unheard,

whistling along with the gusts of wind blowing by,

louder,

but still silent,

silence lasts,

a never ending tune carried out and into your soul,

memories full fill the beat,

a soft lullaby,

the rhythem always will be heard through your heart,

silence makes love grow

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-02-14 04:17 PM

I like this!
More please...

JL

wvatvrider
Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 78
West Virginia,USA

2 posted 2006-02-14 06:14 PM

very nice poem--ghettogurl
          spelling corrections -sensual
                               -rhythm
continue to write-I very much like your style.  You might try a spell check program or (dictionary.com) for words you are unsure of-correct spelling adds to an easier understanding and may keep someone from being distracted from your message--You write beautifully.
         Danny

ghettogurl13
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 11

3 posted 2006-02-15 11:38 AM

thanx

Marge Tindal