Open Poetry #37 |
What a woman really wants (Happy Valentine to all) |
Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
What a woman really wants (Happy Valentine to all) While we are on the subject She is not looking for Mr. Perfect Or Prince Charming or Mr. Right So don’t even think of Sir Knight She is not looking for a hard bod So don’t bring out a Mr. Stud And as incredible as it may seems Neither a millionaire made of dreams Not a one still tied to the umbilical cord Or acts as if he is Earth’s new found Lord Not a one who will always run for cover But one who will stay and be a Harlequin Lover No, she doesn’t need a well-behaved pup Only a strong man who is well brought up She wants an ordinary, modern man Unaware that he is God’s gift to woman He is able to keep her chemistry on a stir And will strive not to put anyone above her Supportive and caring yet so daring Totally loving her without comparing Sensitive minus wimpy and weepy A generous nature with some “skimpy” For her he must always have the “hots” She wants his honesty with some guts One who can kiss away ordeals and pain Instead of driving her up-wall insane He loves all her faults and will tell her so She really wants a guy with some verbal flow He is able to keep some of his promises And make up for missed ones with hot kisses A warm sense of humour with some fun A guy who will fill her with honeyed sun He must have some inner beauty That will worship hers as if it is his soul’s duty Protective and caring with a possessive design Capable of sending thrill chills down her spine Intelligence and ambition relaxing with a kind heart Independent, stable, responsible, excitingly smart Not afraid of the kitchen and his feminine side A guy who keeps up with the times in a stride And after each ultimate trip back from heaven She wants him to cuddle her till 22/7 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
All those ... a maybe a few more~ Happy Valentine's Day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
taking notes here. the 22/7 is a great snapshot perhaps 25/7 in thought and 20ish 6 in touch? enjoyed this ms |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXCELLENT WRITE!!!! Happy Valentine's Day! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, good luck! I am sure he is out there somewhere, and hopefully, not already wrapped up in some other lover's arms! That's quite the list! grinning at dark's reply, as he doesn't require much notebook space |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Marge Tindal, D.S, Nancy,MidnightSun, thanks for reading me.... righ here in my home... :-) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...and you got what you want...fabulous...James |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
all these many things just to fill your cup when all a man wants is one who shows up willing |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
JamesMichael, so good to see you in my poetic world... Icebox...remarkable isn't it... all he wants is some willing while she wants the whole package... Lol...I guess he wouldnt be male if he wants the same, hmm... lol |
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