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of rivers sorting rain |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we are slow waters behind the stones in our own grotto of quiescence and I know your currents as mine and how they weave into memory socks like fingers in a cake mix momentary impressions but the sweetness makes one taste and erese the lines that should have been tattoos placed from the inside out not just on the skin lovely erosion of beforehand penitration is a lovely word when considering applications as I try to itemize from the herd of the droplets of my million pores which are those just me and which are all us _________________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your words remind me so much of a poet I followed years ago, when I first started writing...he was extraordinarily gifted as you are... Here's wishing you a lovely Valentine's Day with that pill counting gal...smiles and hugs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I will envision the water's penetration into creek rocks... and hear the swirl of bubbling sounds... a lovely gift you leave us with, this full mooned Valentine's morn... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady Lee J and Lady Sunshine, happy V day to you both and thanks for the eyes here |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh...loved this one! I loved these lines Dark... Like fingers in a cake mix momentary impressions but the sweetness makes one taste and erese the lines Hey! Happy Valentine's Day to you and your bike too  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mysteria.. she and I both say thanks lady for the V-day thought I think her chrome likes you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"which are those just me and which are all us" Love that ending!!  |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Dark and deep as rivers and mysterious as rain ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you little neighbor for the eyes. _____________ ms airG, you bless me lady friend, thank you |
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