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Open Poetry #37
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2006-02-14 02:56 AM


We understand
But . . .
We understand
Yet . . .
We understand
However . . .

There is no
But
Yet
However

No
You don’t understand
So it’s better

You
Just
Back
Off
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-02-14 06:51 PM

hmm, I think I understand this one
so I won't say it

but I do

so now, I'll back away
Dr.Moose1
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Bewilderment , USA
2 posted 2006-02-14 09:12 PM

Huan Yi,
No comment.
Doc
Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
3 posted 2006-02-14 10:58 PM

Succinct, sharp, resounding.

Those conjunctions and preopsitions can take a hike!  LOL
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-23 03:08 PM

a fight won by the boss.
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