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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-02-13 11:53 PM

Would thouset be mine?

This heart lies open,
come touch it, with
your velvet words,
smooth, silky, like
sweet chocolate, melting
across warm lips.

Its yours if you want it,
ready to love again,
love so sweet,
tender, caring, passionate,
wrapped around you, softly,
tenderly warming your heart.

All I want is to please you,
be your every desire,
make all your dreams come true,
dream with you, grow old with you.

Let me listen to your soul,
share your thoughts with me,
all that you are,
me living inside of you,
let me be your everything.

Who will claim this heart?
with brave , honest love,
love deeper than skin,
stronger than time,
willing to take risks?

So shall I ask again?

Would thouest be mine,
oh Valentine?

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (02-15-2006 07:50 AM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2006-02-14 12:01 PM

Once again .... this must me your favorite holiday!!

simply beautiful!

ct

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2006-02-14 12:07 PM

Why yes it is, apart from my birthday which is also in the same month, and coming up really soon.

Now if I just had that kind of love that I write about, that woul be a wish come true, maybe I will make one when I blow out my b-day candles...and hope it will come true...LOL

Thanks ctowen~
~ARH

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-02-14 02:10 AM

A treat...James

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

4 posted 2006-02-14 05:58 AM

Be mine, my valentine lol

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

5 posted 2006-02-14 06:07 AM

with a poem like that - there will be no shortage of Valentines

a poet who cares

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

6 posted 2006-02-14 06:28 AM

That is as hot as it is romantic. I dunno whether to go all melty, or all gooey...

wvatvrider
Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 78
West Virginia,USA

7 posted 2006-02-14 06:30 AM

best Valentine I've read in a long time

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2006-02-14 07:52 AM

how could anyone refuse after such a sublime poem....lovely write, as always.

Hugs and Happy Day to you
Lee J.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2006-02-14 09:30 AM

A poem of deep love and respect..yes i will be your valentine ARH..now and ever after..thank you ..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA