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starinthedark
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 32

0 posted 2006-02-13 04:05 PM

I seek solitude for my pain is hard to share.
I miss every breath of you.
I miss all that we have shared.
My love for you is immeasurable.
My heart no key to lock.
I cannot hide my fears from you.
My cries I know you hear.
Don't go far away my love.
For here I will always be.
You hold my heart, body, mind and soul.
Only you possess the key.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-02-13 04:15 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A wonderful entrance post..
Just in time for Valentine's Day.
I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

starinthedark
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 32

2 posted 2006-02-13 04:21 PM

Thank you so much. I happened on this site today and I have been reading poetry for hours! It is inspiring and wonderful to read words that I can relate too in so many ways.
Starinthedark *

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-02-13 04:43 PM

Welcome to Passions. I hope you continue to enjoy your reading and writing time here. There are many poets and styles to read, you should have no trouble spending TOO many hours here! LOL, you might have to lock up the key to your PC some days.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2006-02-13 05:02 PM

I think a lot of us identify strongly with your words... I know I do and look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to Passions!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-02-13 05:15 PM

Welcome to Passions.
What a beautiful expression you have written.

ThisDiamond

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2006-02-13 05:55 PM

Welcome to passions,
From most here you can expect fluffy responses,
Don’t expect such from me.
Where I found the emotion of the words good
The expression was somewhat lackluster.
I feel that love poetry,
Even in angst,
Should have a hint of poetic form,
Which means the words linking in some manner.
You do hint at it
But you should do more
Make the words roll off the page
As it rolls over the heart.
If I seem rather harsh
Sorry,
Still I enjoyed the read
Such that it is.

Gloom

starinthedark
Junior Member

since 2006-02-13

Posts 32

7 posted 2006-02-13 06:11 PM

I enjoyed your honest reply and that is why I am here...to learn and to release...Thank You for the help. Starinthedark

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-02-15 03:05 AM

I must have missed this one yesterday. That is writing straight from the heart. Welcome to Passions.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

9 posted 2006-02-15 03:19 AM

From the heart...to the page. And from the page...to other hearts. What poetry can do more than this? I felt it. Thank you.

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