Open Poetry #37 |
I first wrote Summer's Morn in 1998 - I'd like to reprise it |
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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I've changed this so much and so often yet I still come back to what I dont like yet I do like because it was the essence of what I wanted to badly write Dave When I saw the sun kiss you on a summer's morn And moonlight kissed your hair on the day you were born When I saw the look in your eyes A kind of crimsom mess The swirl of the world beneath your feet Flowing your dress to match your hair And the love of your eyes Was sad and deep and warm I saw the tilt of your nose Light the smile of your lips The love of yourself A sense of belonging in your time and space A deep laughter in your throat Echoing the world's embrace I see you in the world I cannot see the world without You in it's heart And a smile like a roustabout But sometimes I see an upturned nose And a furrowed brow And I wait for the sky to clear And move the thunder loud To sink to an early red dawn Of another summer's morn |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Dave, Your words have such a warm feeling about them. As I read this the words just seem to flow along with the classical music I am listening too. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Froggy I wont ask what classical you are listening too Take care Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
The Classical music is by King Crimson, the title was Prelude: Song for the Gulls. Very beautiful music to write and read poetry. So is Mozart piano Concertos. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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