Open Poetry #37 |
Indomitable |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I watch you grow each day, embracing a world sometimes cold lacking in luster of gleam and shine clawing and scratching white washed surfaces coated with the hypocrisy of faces contorted those knowing not heart..... It is only greed they suffer from, endowing themselves in lies fulfilling a need for their next fix obtaining a thrill inflicting their will; upon the weak upon the meek and you... regard not what the world throws your way... come what may I watch you grow each day stronger, indomitable the will to survive. seek the flame within yourself |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
The words you say are so truthful and meaningful. I love your work. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
like a pregnancy, almost...a growth of wonderful visions...self exploration is so vastly open doored.... hugs |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed the honesty of this, the fire simmering below the lines surface...thank you Donna.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
to blossom beyond the thorns |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I measure as a quality tailor cut my cloth to the proudest degree then sell to those who value cheap as having value I cared about my skill, I cared about my self Now all they seek Is cheap And not myself My intepretation Sorry if I've got it wrong Dave |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It is only greed they suffer from, endowing themselves in lies fulfilling a need for their next fix obtaining a thrill inflicting their will; upon the weak upon the meek Excellent writing...such a mood conveyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all... Peace..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Happy Valentine's Day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*laughing* Oh, you describe yourself well, Donna This is beyond beautiful. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Such a joy to read!! JL |
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wvatvrider Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 78West Virginia,USA |
the will to survive-we shall overcome-at least at times-it can be a struggle-but well worth the trip |
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