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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I wonder of your shoulders now as you recline a horizon to my eyes do they taste like your perfume with sugar added to the sultry and of your hips there nearly hidden do they crave to be in the safety of my man cave with the spoons of us making them part of our hours and as I lift your hair in my mind opening the doorway under your ears for a tiptoe kiss and whisper would I find the lock removed and a candle lit welcome mat for many returns to your attention would the curves of your journey fill my hands with freefall sighways lined with lover's playing slow signs _________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, this is as good as any way to start the long week on a Monday... thank you for this slip of white quiet, Sir. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your gentle way with words is, to me, at odds with your fiercer side that is often behind closed doors.  You are comfortably seductive, like a warm bed on a cold morning... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thank you lady friend for the touch on the ends of my thoughts. _________ serene one...even the fierce side is so very gentle really...although it may be tediously unabridged, thank you lady |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a beautifully orchastrated rendition....one of which will surely paint her happy... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J, bless you for the smile words ms, you are warmth, thank you |
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om Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31ontario/canada |
very cool! Pulled me in from the beginning! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend om, thank you for the read and comments. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Your words are like the hot sun on skin needing warmth Julie |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Dark, I'm looking out for your poetry now. Every time I read your work, I get a good example of what great writing is. I'm a fan, lol. Wonderful as usual. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms whiskey, you make me smile lady friend, please hurry close when ever there is a chill..by the way I sent a cold wind and some ice cubes just in case.(grin) _____ friend Ed, thanks so much sir for the comments, you do smile this humble spinner of charactors |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Deeply romantic. I love it! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms air G, thanks lady friend, you punish me with pride with your consideration |
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