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Deja Vu
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Deja Vu |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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I began to see, Through sleep filled eyes, That the trails I tred, were worn. I checked their depth, And realized... That long before This-ME was born... These routes had well been travelled. These paths had long been known. In the path... I found a footprint. The impression was my own. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Absolutely loving your poetry Uriah! A great description of deja vu. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully put |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Cool write. Lots of luck, bgj |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Been there...done that...here I am again! LOL I loved this Uriah! Klassy  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent!! |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
If we were in person right now, I'd be clapping. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enjoyed the double-travel of your mind and your feet. - Owl |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
Nice lar, I like this one ... makes me think of "Footsteps" but I perfer this look within, rather than without.Understand? tera |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
you are one very talented old country boy/hippie fersure....!!!!!! |
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