Open Poetry #37 |
Being Chased Around The Sun |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
wasteland wanderings bring memories of many some living some dead when souls are sleeping sharing channels are open time has no limits some came as victims some collateral damage all look for shelter for most there are debts others sleep seeking solace for love or for hate I am the watcher of this desolate landscape sleep is not easy ©2006 by icebox |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ What a thoughtful bouquet of Senryu to greet the afternoon~ Your talent is sooooo recognized and appreciated~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox I'm glad to see you posted this in this forum. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
If you are the watcher of dreamtime, perhaps I'll sleep better tonight... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It's good to know you are there Dave |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is odd but I never remember my dreams, but when I do, they are those biting real dreams where you strike up, teary eyed wondering if they really happened. The ones that leave you in a major funk for a couple of days. Your last stanza made me feel as if you were the first three, as well. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some leave messages but not if one eye opened they travel the dark ~*~ Thank you, Sir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Yes sleep is not easy. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The setting sun shown through the polluted atmosphere dispensing its light for the pleasure of the Watchers. One Watcher said that the sky looked like Mother of Pearl. That made sense somehow. Just hugs, Mr. C. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
tonight will you point me in the right direction? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Wow..very nicely written.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
no, I don't imagine sleep comes easily or quietly for a night watchman reminding me...kokopelli, that "the night has a thousand eyes" |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I figure if you walk through a wasteland once it was something special filled with people that now have dead and gone. great write enjoyed it |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Every night...every single night of this world...and of course without saying, even at times denying...for the best of reasons. I do understand. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
good . . . |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
It's 3.10am where I am right now, and sleep does not come easy. Your word touched me. Hugs, Fee Expressions, |
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