Open Poetry #37 |
From X-Ray to Albany |
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
From X-Ray To Albany Jungle surrounds us Prohibiting progress A density of confusion In which we lose Direction Ambushed by uncertainty. Andrew |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know this... intensely. Well done, Andrew. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You're saying lots with this piece, whether you think you are or not :P I can't give you a constructive critisism of your punctuation because it's part of your style, and though your particular use of capitals drives me nuts, it's part of your style and it's part of what makes it so Andrewish and then He created the horse... |
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