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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-12 03:03 PM



   i love your poetry

if your body could flow with me

down a sidewalk one day

we might be able to say

the stuff we really feel

like how we'd love to peel

away the layers of the past

            fast

         enough

   to avoid the bluff

  of disappointment

when we find out that we both supply

the Blue Star Ointment

     that could satisfy

            souls



                                 love,

                                 howard



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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-02-12 11:38 PM


we might be able to say

the stuff we really feel

like how we'd love to peel

away the layers of the past

I like these lines~

~ARH

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