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The power of words.
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The power of words. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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your body is filling with letters waiting to be connected waiting to create words you will cut and paste rearrange so you're not haunted in your sleep with the incomplete phrasing with the period left hanging the pencil poised you can't kept your hands steady forever the tension will build it's already coming out in your unfinised sentenc... what happens when you become your letters and your words what's left of a life if words are the only thing used to describe it and you can't even bring yourself to write them
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Like this one too. Just as much as the first one.  Love it! |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
O.K...I DID..Exale, I mean.. great write, Love, Kathy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many lines... well done... only had one question of word usage, but overall... a haunting poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
exhale Why you bobbed like a cork. Well done. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved this: "if words are the only thing used to describe it and you can't even bring yourself to write them" ...exquisite ending |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"you can't kept your hands steady forever the tension will build it's already coming out in your unfinised sentenc..." Forceful exhale. Well done! |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Well done, indeed! Loved it! |
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