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Silence |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Can the gentle breeze bring, a man I long to cling? Just a lifetime with you, is that too much to ask of you? Who can tell of my sorrow... Perhaps a dying sparrow... The sun casts a shadow, Upon someone I hardly know. Bring Him back to me... My woeful cries into the sea... There came no reply, Only the gentle breeze... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
There is immense talent here I almost think of a bird of a first flight Meaning, emotion controlled delivered Yes Dave |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"The sun casts a shadow, Upon someone I hardly know." Good work. More please. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Gee...thanks for the encouragement! Bodger and Lady  FNG [This message has been edited by FNG (02-13-2006 05:45 AM).] |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate , I have sat by the sea , whispering the same longing plea Hope |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hope, I wish you are not longing anymore. FNG |
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