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Open Poetry #37

The Kiss (senryu)

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2006-02-10 08:51 PM

in a lover’s kiss
delicious insanity
so much more than touch

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-02-10 09:22 PM

Excellent!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-02-10 09:25 PM

Neat write.
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-10 10:27 PM

Perfect!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-02-10 10:32 PM

3 lines and it says so much. Good job!

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2006-02-11 09:15 AM

Excellent thoughts, and so succinct. You are a master, INclan. We should see more of you.

J

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

6 posted 2006-02-11 03:15 PM

Touch isn't everything but the kiss

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2006-02-11 04:23 PM

Excellent!

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

8 posted 2006-02-11 04:26 PM

I really enjoyed this, very nice. Cheers - Ed

Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it".

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

9 posted 2006-02-13 12:48 PM

Thank you all for reading and replying. JoannaK...the same can be said of you.
Best Regards,
INclan

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2006-02-16 07:05 PM

Absolutely perfect Senryu! I am so glad I went digging for treasures that I might have missed while I've been away. I am pleased that I didnt miss this!!

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

11 posted 2006-02-16 11:36 PM

Wonderful ! ::smiles and bows::

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