Open Poetry #37 |
The Kiss (senryu) |
INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
in a lover’s kiss delicious insanity so much more than touch |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! In the midst of winter, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Neat write. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Perfect! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
3 lines and it says so much. Good job! |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Excellent thoughts, and so succinct. You are a master, INclan. We should see more of you. J What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Touch isn't everything but the kiss |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I really enjoyed this, very nice. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you all for reading and replying. JoannaK...the same can be said of you. Best Regards, INclan |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely perfect Senryu! I am so glad I went digging for treasures that I might have missed while I've been away. I am pleased that I didnt miss this!! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful ! ::smiles and bows:: |
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