Open Poetry #37 |
talker of songs |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when the man of coins returns to the sea and places his gold on a sleeping man's eyes his burden is light straw without water he has his eagles back in his dreams and he can run the dark forests alone til the morning brings him his chains again the talkers of legend speak of him in whispers they say he is the taker of souls from stone but they say he is also the true healer that he touches the earth with widows tears and that oaks grow from their sorrows they speak his name with out sounds lest mothers come to worship those he keeps _____________ daark for my sunny friend, be well special one |
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gypsyheartx Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 104Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland |
Wow! Extremely powerful, I'm getting good images out of this one. If I'm not mistaken doesn't the "gold over the eyes" mean that that person is confirmed dead? Or is it a sign of respect after death? I can't remember, but this is really great. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds of truth ages of soul keeper of chimes all hear the wolf... even the talker of songs This has some extreme meaning for me. So, I'm putting it in a very special place. Thank you, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend gypsy, yes a motion of respect and a time of freedom for the one who places the coins. thanks for the read _________________ ms sunshine, yes I do believe it has a special place for you...be well lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wow! I knew from the title I was going to love it! Impressive work. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS When your heart speaks, there are few that can compare to it's sensitive message. |
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