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Let Go
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Let Go |
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Carly Maas Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 23Garden City, MI, USA |
Let Go How could you do this to me? Just all of a sudden, Out of the blue. You turned your head, You walked away. You blocked me out, Not letting me inside, Not letting me see the real you, You always tried to hide. I tried to help, I loved you so much, But you turned away, You ran from my touch. My touch could have saved you, Had you let me inside, Let me try and help, Instead of pushing me aside. If you only could have seen, My feelings for you were real, I didn't try and hide, I wanted to let you inside. But it's too late now, Now you're gone, You left without a trace. All I want to do is see your face, To kiss you once more, To hold you close, And never let go. I loved you with all my heart and soul, But you betrayed me, Now, It's time for me to let go. "One day you'll love me as I onced loved you, |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
You said it perfectly.... I know this all tooooo well and was able to let go with my head held high. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hello, and welcome back good write with powerful feelings |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...if they let go, what else can you do but follow their lead...James |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
Sad yet positive  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
letting go has its place .... ... just like when we first learn of love .... somewhere there is a Love with a shut off switch!! a deep write ... * Ct |
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