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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2005-07-05 03:09 PM

Your open heart was the take on the matter
the things that strike insufferable
remain a brief novella in your history
the church got all of your mother's money and her body
leaving you broke with nothing left but lonely passion
the passion trapped in your genes
refined out of forgiveness
the same passion you would share with me in a world of lost art
the art of sincerity distinguished from unworthy passion
my mysterious search for wholesome love, drifted out of your windows, your lips, your breath, your very existence.......

the first time I looked at your glowing freckled face
I thought the freckles would be rough
to the touch
but you were so fresh and farm girl beautiful
that I just had to try,
had to somehow steal a stroke, a brush against your skin
and when I finally did
it was like touching the smooth open blossom of a lily
and then our first kiss
your lips were moist and full
felt like they had been softened
by a Godly sent sweet misty spring rain
as you gave yourself to me
without any apprehension
My insides pushed my heart into my throat
the magic that sometimes falls out of heaven
captured us for the duration
it was then I realized
passion without love was against the rules of conscience

oh how that kiss has never died
now that same kiss speaks your mind with love
and familiarity,
reminds me of your simple brilliance,
accompanied by your angel scent
and the treasure of a thousand smiles
you always give to me free
I gently break away and I have to tell you
everything is alright
you can take anything you want from me.

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2005-07-05 03:20 PM

Hey Eric: It's been a while since I've read your work, but let me tell you, it has only become better and is still a treat to read. Very nicely written, with a gentle understanding and appreciation that reflects in the reader's mind. Thank you for sharing.

-MVS

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-07-05 03:22 PM

She needs nothing else from you, for you have given her everything by giving her your heart....

I cannot express how utterly beautiful I found your loving and appreciative words to be. When love is found first on the higher level, the love explored on the physical level is that much more enjoyable and fulfilling.

EA

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-07-05 03:44 PM

There are not words to describe your words

Excellence seems to be something almost of an insult

Bodger

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-07-06 01:56 PM

Dang...
you make me want
to put my pens away
and just read...

Thank you, Ethome.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-07-06 03:04 PM

ethome
Now put that to music and you really got something. A deliight to read.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-07-06 03:14 PM

Amazingly beautiful!!!! I hope she feels the same of you, and that you are a KEEPER!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-07-08 03:53 AM

Enjoyed...James

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2005-07-08 05:28 AM

Ethome, sometimes words don't come to express how we really feel about our loved ones. I am glad you didn't have that problem. Simply beautiful.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2005-07-08 09:55 AM

oh.... That is so lovely. I love that poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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