Open Poetry #36 |
Crazy Dream |
stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Words will not describe Insatiable wonder A second shadow Kill the light There she stood Never knew Finally she smiled Eyes wide open Walking on air I am helpless Approved by two I am frozen from thought Blonde with a touch of green Colors bend in the wind Sand between healing Orange moon, waves crashing Make my way I put my arms around her Am I way out of bounds? Let this night never end Introduce me to your heart we know no more empty |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
filled to the brim, with love for all things... loved this... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
we know no more empty Perfect ending -- absolutely perfect. Isn't it strange, how such a complex emotion can be said so completely, in such a simple way! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Well written of the deep feelings love gives us...*hug* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
now that is a warm and pleasant dream |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Thank you all for reading, I really do appreciate all of your responses, Steve |
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