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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2005-08-08 12:21 PM

Such burning heat,
as this summer night flames on...
no respite-
even the moon seems to rage
between your breath's rise and fall.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-08-08 12:30 PM

WOW!! You sure capture the bleathlessness of it very well...I could feel it all over again....*big hugs*

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2005-08-08 12:47 PM

Many Thanks ~ST.....*hugs* back

~P

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-08-08 01:03 PM

I could feel the heat singeing my feathers! Gosh, Chosh, your poetry certainly can affect the readers of it! Now that's what I call sharing! lol

Love & Light,
EA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2005-08-08 01:06 PM

Well done. Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2005-08-08 03:43 PM

Dear EA, Thank you...! Hope the singe won't stiffle your wonderful flight....Warm wishes P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2005-08-08 03:45 PM

Dear Interloper,

Thank you...!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-08-09 07:08 PM

i dig your heat and the beat is real sweet
and good to see your daddeo

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2005-08-09 08:28 PM

Cool coolio you inkedgoddess hipster...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2005-08-09 11:18 PM

even high heat feels good when you put it this way

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2005-08-10 02:13 AM

Paul -- whoa....now that was really well done & HOT!

.....jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-08-11 06:00 PM

Enjoyed...James

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2005-08-11 06:27 PM

Thank you James, glad that you enjoyed....~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2005-08-11 06:28 PM

Thank you ~Jo....."well-done" I like that...like a BBQ !

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

14 posted 2005-08-11 06:32 PM

Thank you Kacy, ....P

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