Open Poetry #36 |
four twenty nine southbound |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
metal wheels chewing marshmallows the four twenty nine amtraking animal cracker shapes from the tagger's gun slow shot jello colors baby snott shimmer and the security guard slumbers unsocial security never gets his man but the can man does with his back pack hijacks and krylon rattles through the alleys pretending to be mountain sided with some promised sun on tiptoes skirt less waiting for her turn to dance and be a discovered monday _______________ dark scribblenote...4:29 freight going by..southbound..tagged up pretty by krylon colors another so-cal monday [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-08-2005 09:13 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*wince* It's just a brush burn. (my fault actually, I should put on leathers before I read you) Now order me a grand slam? I'm gonna go clean up a bit. OH. Two glasses of milk please.... grin |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the monday morning ride missin the scribble note tho |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and krylon rattles through the alleys pretending to be mountain sided with some promised sun on tiptoes skirt less waiting for her turn to dance and be a discovered ... ~*~ um-hmmmm... and be. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
baby snott shimmer and the security guard slumbers unsocial security never gets his man but the can man does with his back pack hijacks Your minds optical sensors track trajectory with a digital mental fusion Delivered to all who read |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
OH yeah, I love the krylon colors you paint with. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and krylon rattles through the alleys pretending to be mountain sided with some promised sun on tiptoes skirt less waiting for her turn to dance ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ anyone ever tell ya that you rock? and? only YOU could make this poetically perfect.. baby snott shimmer yeah... you rock! I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
lol YES!! He does rock!! for sure. [This message has been edited by Cloud 9 (08-08-2005 02:46 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think I saw that very freight choo choo by my neck of the hood, some hours and minutes later. |
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