Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-08-08
07:24 AM
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Powers of the Night
The powers of the night surmise The minds and egos compromise That plays upon a stage of veil The movements of my ship of sail
Within this bring of nightly net I catch my swing of fancies let And when I sort the prize in day It often blows my mind away
Intrigue is the set of swing And phantom takes the place of thing And I am knighted Lancelot Eating from this fancies pot
I ride a carpet magic will Catching egos flowers spill Bringing me a second life And without realities strife
You’re privy to confessions booth An aching tooth but still the truth
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2005-08-08
07:32 AM
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Nod--I had you pegged for a netcaster.
Y'catch a lotta life that way, but I also had you pegged for one who'd spend a couple of hours, tossing back the innocents.
King crabs tho? You can have 'em. I'm mean. I like the wimmen crabs---slurrrrrrrrrrp.
(Bet you do too.*battin' eyelashes*)
Give me the oranges...poranges? who cares?
*chuckle*
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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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Pennsylvania
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2005-08-08
07:39 AM
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"You’re privy to confessions booth An aching tooth but still the truth"
See More:
A more perfect ending could not be had...
Love the honesty in your poetry, a man of experience tells it like it is......
enjoyed
------------ice ><>
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2005-08-08
08:48 AM
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Sir Seemorelots, may your ship of sail prevail!
Ride that magic carpet for the rest of your life and banish all of reality's strife!
Due to the length of your wise tooth, you share with all thy wisdom's truth!
Angel hugs & kisses, EA
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Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2005-08-08
08:55 AM
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Seymour~ My friend ... you always rock the rhyme~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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LeeJ
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2005-08-08
09:02 AM
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they say, experience is sometimes the money prize...your a wealthy sea fairing man, or'r the sea of life...thank you for sharing
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Janet Marie
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2005-08-08
10:44 AM
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You’re privy to confessions booth An aching tooth but still the truth ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and that will be the coolest couplet I read today... you are so groovy!! and Im loving Sens reply too.. she knows ya well. See?? We just cant but help love ya.
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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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2005-08-08
12:43 PM
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BRAVO!!! To ride such a magic carpet ride opens worlds of fantasy the lighten the heart giving life to the soul...I love it...*big hugs*
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-08-08
08:01 PM
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serenity, Oh you caught me a long time ago.
ice Now that's pretty warm for ice. LOL
Earth Angel, You are one of a kind, hugs and kisses back.
Marge, You are a sweetheart.
LeeJ, Thank you for the read and comment.
JM, Randy, give that girl a
Startime55, And hugs back to you.
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suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
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2005-08-09
01:14 PM
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I ride a carpet magic will Catching egos flowers spill Bringing me a second life And without realities strife
The powers of your night = the pleasures of our day. *S*
Beautiful write, my friend! *S*
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-08-09
01:46 PM
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suthern Thank you dear.
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