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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-08-08 07:24 AM


Powers of the Night

The powers of the night surmise
The minds and egos compromise
That plays upon a stage of veil
The movements of my ship of sail

Within this bring of nightly net
I catch my swing of fancies let
And when I sort the prize in day
It often blows my mind away

Intrigue is the set of swing
And phantom takes the place of thing
And I am knighted Lancelot
Eating from this fancies pot

I ride a carpet magic will
Catching egos flowers spill
Bringing me a second life
And without realities strife

You’re privy to confessions booth
An aching tooth but still the truth


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-08-08 07:32 AM


Nod--I had you pegged for a netcaster.

Y'catch a lotta life that way, but I also had you pegged for one who'd spend a couple of hours, tossing back the innocents.

King crabs tho? You can have 'em. I'm mean. I like the wimmen crabs---slurrrrrrrrrrp.

(Bet you do too.*battin' eyelashes*)

Give me the oranges...poranges? who cares?

*chuckle*

ice
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2 posted 2005-08-08 07:39 AM


"You’re privy to confessions booth
An aching tooth but still the truth"

See More:

A more perfect ending could not be had...

Love the honesty in your poetry, a man of experience tells it like it is......

enjoyed

------------ice
   ><>

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-08-08 08:48 AM



Sir Seemorelots, may your ship of sail prevail!

Ride that magic carpet for the rest of your life and banish all of reality's strife!

Due to the length of your wise tooth, you share with all thy wisdom's truth!

Angel hugs & kisses,
EA
Flower


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4 posted 2005-08-08 08:55 AM


Seymour~
My friend ... you always rock the rhyme~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-08-08 09:02 AM


they say, experience is sometimes the money  prize...your a wealthy sea fairing man, or'r the sea of life...thank you for sharing
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2005-08-08 10:44 AM


You’re privy to confessions booth
An aching tooth but still the truth

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
and that will be the coolest couplet I read today... you are so groovy!!
and Im loving Sens reply too.. she knows ya well.
See?? We just cant but help love ya.

*ww*


Startime55
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7 posted 2005-08-08 12:43 PM


BRAVO!!! To ride such a magic carpet ride opens worlds of fantasy the lighten the heart giving life to the soul...I love it...*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-08-08 08:01 PM


serenity,
Oh you caught me a long time ago.

ice
Now that's pretty warm for ice. LOL

Earth Angel,
You are one of a kind, hugs and kisses back.

Marge,
You are a sweetheart.

LeeJ,
Thank you for the read and comment.

JM,
Randy, give that girl a

Startime55,
And hugs back to you.

suthern
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9 posted 2005-08-09 01:14 PM


I ride a carpet magic will
Catching egos flowers spill
Bringing me a second life
And without realities strife

The powers of your night = the pleasures of our day. *S*

Beautiful write, my friend! *S*

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-08-09 01:46 PM


suthern
Thank you dear.

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