Open Poetry #36 |
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Simple hope |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) ![]() |
Speak to me Let me know what I have missed remind this soul of the past Tell me with simple words for my mind does not allow me to think when words are complex Say what you must even if it is meant to hurt just forgive me when you are done let me be humbled by each sentence I beg to return as the lost prodigal son better to re-enter as a servant to a loved one then to be a king of the fools I have made my mistakes you have been proven right let us end our battle I am nothing without you a empty vessel floating away |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this very much. I hope your straightforward open-hearted honesty is well received. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have realized a very strong truth ~ "better to re-enter as a servant to a loved one then to be a king of the fools" ~ May your "hope" come true, Dear Man In Blue! Peace, Love, Light, & Harmony, EA ![]() |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Thank you for your kind comments. ![]() Tom |
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