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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Lovefelt I sit here wondering if "it" is all worth it, this aloneness beginning to take its toll, as I begin to feel like a rag doll in this heat. How much more emotion can be squeezed out of me? How many more "wrongs" can be happening? Just once it would be nice to be surprised by the unexpected, something lovefelt to yesterday a memory... To be a captive audience of one, to be the "missing piece", to be titled to you. My thoughts are uncontrollable and my heart ever so sincere and I would like to finish that which has not been, knowing the afterkiss is so bittersweet... ~There is always room for another memory~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
"How much more emotion can be squeezed out of me? How many more "wrongs" can be happening? Just once it would be nice to be surprised by the unexpected, something lovefelt to yesterday a memory... To be a captive audience of one, to be the "missing piece", to be titled to you. My thoughts are uncontrollable and my heart ever so sincere and I would like to finish that which has not been, knowing the afterkiss is so bittersweet..." This is excellent.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you C9  M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
M-I like the images in this one, the rag doll in the heat, and especially the bitter afterkiss. That's a strong one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Nan...hope the weather is treating you better than it is here...  M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you are right, M there is always room for more |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And you will...James |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
And the sweet nectar Bodger |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent M.. and there is always room for more memories~ the fun is in the making them. Great piece~Hugs. Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes the fun is in the making of new memories..hopefully the good kind...to replace some of the bad I have been experiencing lately and thanksM |
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