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Have You Ever Thought
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Have You Ever Thought |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Have You Ever Thought With no further details I might as well guess Just my own thoughts Perhaps you care less Thoughts never lessen They always increase Guessing all the time I shall never find peace By having no answers I am always guessing Creating more despair It becomes depressing I keep being reminded Do not worry you say Yet you're the reason I'm guessing each day Loving communication This friendship began Have you ever thought Perhaps try if you can Through good and bad We had kept in touch I'm sure that you know You do mean so much Hope ©2005 With graphic and music link below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_763797.html |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
"Thoughts never lessen They always increase Guessing all the time I shall never find peace By having no answers I am always guessing Creating more despair It becomes depressing " Loved this part |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hope, the music is a wonderful addition to your beautiful poem! Lovely, lovely, lovely!  Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes things happen...and the communication is lost for a time... don't lose "hope"  M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes people simply DON'T think. It can be hard on the rest of us. I like the way you wrote this one, the short sharp lines are effective. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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