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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

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honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2005-08-04 07:55 AM

Lily pockets rise in the back yard as moon fills the flower glasses,
ancient comes guarding trouble
As the birds I know gather.
Mother grounds my sorrow as we gable our laughter for laughter.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-08-04 08:24 AM

redheart,
Enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-08-04 08:54 AM

Very nicely penned Amelia!
It's so good to be reading you once again.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-08-04 09:01 AM

"Lily pockets rise in the back yard as moon fills the flower glasses"

That is one very cool line.

The title is perfect.

You know just what you want to say and just how to say it..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2005-08-04 09:14 AM

Like this line a lot...

"Mother grounds my sorrow as we gable our laughter for laughter."

Good stimulation of ideas.

Eric

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-08-04 10:09 AM

wonderful expression...enjoyed

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-08-04 10:17 AM

RedHeartAngryBraids ~
Little one ... it is ALWAYS such a treat to see you here sharing with us~

Lovely, Amelia~
Don't stay away so long !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-08-05 02:00 AM

Nice writing...James

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-08-05 03:10 AM

*inhaling you*

I read your work, and I'm overwhelmed at times as how your spirituality shines through and fills my soul.

You are an absolute joy to read dear lady, and oh two, in two days.

I'd keep my fingers crossed for more, but it would get in the way of holding your hand.

You are clear liquid light Amelia.

Beautiful.

she'll_be_apples
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since 2005-07-11

Posts 22

9 posted 2005-08-05 04:41 PM

I wish i had read this last night, I really needed to read these your words.

beautiful redheart

~peace~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

10 posted 2005-08-05 06:08 PM

enjoyed the unique imagery

Ratleader

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11 posted 2005-08-08 12:00 PM

This poem may be short (a good thing), the lines so irregular that anti-form describes them best.... but it captures a poignant moment -- shows it clear in all dimensions -- as well as any structured poem could. I like this poem very much for that, and for its insight. I've read it four times today, but saved my comment 'til now.

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

12 posted 2005-08-08 12:02 PM

It was nice to read your unique ways, once again.

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