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Come Over Here
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Come Over Here |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Don't stand there, Come to me, Please take my hand, Smile at me Come over here, Come and I will give you My love, To you, Come over here, My love, Love will be there with you, Come over here, I will say it once Come here to me, I will make you happy, I will take your sorrow away Come over here Tell me what's matter? I will make it right, Come to me, I will give you my love, you will live with me, And Iam ready to be yours, forever, Come over here, Don't be afraid of me, Iam here to comfort you Come over here, I will take your troubles away, I will lay my love on your shoulder Come over here, Don't sit there lonely, Come over here.... |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is a very sweet poem. I enjoyed it. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I doubt that there would be a "single" man out there that would need to be asked twice! Once would be enough! That would be an invitation near impossible to refuse!  Good to read you again!  Linda |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Almost hynoptic Bodger |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
what beautiful heart shines in this --  Susan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, your writing has improved so much from your first offerings. This was, as stated above, hypnotic! |
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