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On the sea of thoughts
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On the sea of thoughts |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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O Love! Terrible Love! On the sea of thoughts, The heart has gone, heartache nears- and sorrow chimes with each heartbeat those that fell before exulting, Whilst tears fall from eyes, the passage grim and hurting- O bleeding soul! Bleeding slowly to death! Shall not be seen beneath a broken smile. Where upon the oceans face shall I be found, Fallen, cold, death urging me to take flight- a voice whispers O heart! O heart! rise again and hear the soothing chimes once more, If thee stays beneath the sun of worn dreams- thou art bound to be burnt by Love twice over like the oceans drown through and through. Is it but a dream I thought before, This ribbon around my heart bow-tied- the memories swaying back and forth eager in its changing O heart! O love! My soul doth not answer, Its essence frail and still- My heart hath no special pulse, just the common beat its voyage of love sank before it made the journey done. But like the day becomes the night, and night becomes the day, O hearts shall breathe! Beneath the beats sleeping- and chimes shall play a different tone in the making O Love shall breathe again, mournful moments spent. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
"My soul doth not answer, Its essence frail and still- My heart hath no special pulse, just the common beat its voyage of love sank before it made the journey done." This is beautiful....I loved this part.. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
This is excellent Bodger |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
indeed. i thought i was reading whitman for a second |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nicely penned! |
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