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What Could You Be Hiding
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What Could You Be Hiding |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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What Could You Be Hiding How much would you reveal Would a deeper part show If you could be in depth How deep would you go Could you answer honestly What's behind your mask Would the truth surface If someone cared to ask Could you take off the guise Would you willingly share Would the reality unfold If you remove every layer Could there be more to gain What fact would I discover Would I find the real you If I got beyond your cover Could the light ever be shed From the fictional disguise What could you be hiding Behind the engaging eyes Hope©2005 With music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_763569.html |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sometimes people don't even know what they're hiding because it's been so long buried but, yes, if we could only go deeper. Some do, of course, and perhaps they suffer for it. Enjoyed your thoughts. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Would you want the reality unfolded Bodger |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sometimes the mask removed only reveals yet another  Nicely done Hope.~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"What could you be hiding Behind the engaging eyes " well, probably a discombobulated being  |
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