Open Poetry #36 |
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Transcendence via Axe Murdering |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Transcendence via Axe Murdering Creeping, sneaking little girl tip toeing back into my world hands wandering up my shirt don't think I've forgotten the way you can hurt me... Don't crawl back to me when you're out of luck or you'll find out I'm truly sincere in not giving a (edit) Anymore about you closed screen door dividing sky blue stop making sense you idiot heart start the climb towards transcendence Hands bloody shoes muddy Elvis Costello and a cup of coffee a quarter of moon and she's out on the backstreets crying like a loon At me all the time, now rain falling on this city like laughing out loud this idiot heart is sighing for a hint of transcendence Creep, sneak creeping in my sleep in deep stealing my tunes written underneath full midnight moons she fertilized my desert mind with sweetly surrendering rhymes and we used to name the stars after dead rock stars Jimi and Janis twinkled in her eyes but soon my puppy dog loyalty and love drowned in her lies White lilies laid on the grave of all the wasted love I gave death becomes her maybe at night she remembers when the caring was mutual before she made me a fool but now she feels sorry now she's feeling sorry If this is true then... Someday crawl back into my head when the dark night shapes my mood follow the sign of vacancy over my bed someday and I will be sincere in believing you Believing in you somehow it'll be true (if you'll be true, that is) start making sense of my idiot heart and pave my road to transcendence Elvis Costello and coffee in bed a full midnight moon inside my head a velvet kiss and a big golden ring negates transcendence via axe murdering "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey [This message has been edited by SEA (08-03-2005 09:57 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is amazing, I always dig reading you...oh and a reminder...using astricks in place of all or part of a filtered curse word, isn't allowed anymore than the word is. ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sounds like song in the making, to me ![]() M |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW this is amazing and packed with emotion.... In your light I learn how to love |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Nice.... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yes!!! |
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