Open Poetry #36 |
That Day |
evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
When conversations turn to love And all around have had their say With just a little, gentle shove I’ll tell them of that day A day the rain was pouring down And I, though soaking wet Found the coffee shop in town Where she and I first met Alone, she sat with distant stare No ring upon her finger With ruby lips and raven hair I thought that I should linger Being bold as youth will bring I asked if I might sit One look from her made my heart sing I was smitten, I’ll admit She smiled and in that smile I knew That I had found the one To take me to a life, anew My search for love was done For fifty years we made a life Till she was called back home And five years now, I miss my wife Five years now, alone When conversations turn to love And all around have had their say I know she hears me, up above While I tell them of that day. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this a chronic Sorrow, a living loss and a marriage of poignant thoughts, expressing loss powerfully, illuminating and perhaps soul making for the still living... REMEMBER remember me when I am gone away gone far away into the silent land when you can no more hold me by the hand not I half turn to go, yet turning stay remember me when no more day by day you tell me of our future that you plann'd only remember me, you understand it will be late to counsel then oor pray yet if you should forget me for a while and afterwards remember, do not grieve for if the darkness and corruption leave a vestige of the thorughts that once I had better by far you should forget and smile than that you should remember and be sad Christina Georgina Rossetti, 1830-1894 You are wealthy beyond compare to have had such a love ....and we are just as fortunate to have read your love...thank you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
honestly...I'm glad I keep tissues close...you write so beautifully... ((and I'm a cry baby too LOL)) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear... |
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