marcel
Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
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posted
2005-08-01
02:26 AM
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Eyes of The Beholder
I once had to prove to you that I was real, When your heart questioned the sincerity of my heart; And when time whispered your answer My own heart questioned your existence Because you were almost to good to be real, To good to be in love with me--- Even as I kissed the softness of your skin And smelled the warm sweet scent of your essence.
It seems my heart grows fonder by the thoughts, Of dreams and beauty the spring bestows, Erasing the memories of loneliness and doubt, Comforting my soul, if just for today Until I am left with a reflection and a broken mirror Trying to convince the many facets of myself… That I am real.
Marcel
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2005
keith marcel
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2005-08-01
04:47 AM
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A beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs,
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lyricpoet
Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199
NY, USA
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2005-08-01
07:39 AM
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Beautifully, simply lovely...!
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2005-08-01
08:36 AM
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whoa, this gave me chills, how tender and beautiful!
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
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posted
2005-08-01
09:41 AM
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oh I really liked this...
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Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
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2005-08-01
04:09 PM
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Your poem left me pondering and not many poems do that to me. I really liked it.
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