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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-08-01 01:02 AM

Austin Morning Lights

I'm running like a wild stallion,
proud and fast and free.
My corral started feeling like a jail,
after hearing her voice calling out to me.
So I jumped fence and headed for Austin,
the last place she was known to be.

The closer I get the more I know,
within her embrace I yearn to be.
Wild thoughts and desires fill my head
when I feel her heart a calling me.
If I run all night perhaps I'll be
in her arms, by Austin's morning light.

JamesLee
July30
2005
My son and his new wife
just took a trip to Austin
for a job opportunity...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-08-01 09:39 AM

I liked this, very well done, and good luck to your son and his wife!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-08-03 05:52 AM

best wishes for them.
enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

3 posted 2005-08-03 03:39 PM

JM,

Backtracking your poems to see where it (falling in love) started. Enjoyed.

SG

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-08-03 04:51 PM

Well done James..
I wish you son and his wife well in Austin.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2005-08-03 05:11 PM

I liked this, James. It sounded like a song.
And, good luck to your son and his wife.
I hope all works out well for them.
Hugs,
Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-10-26 11:58 PM

One word critique:

Yeowzah!!

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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

7 posted 2005-10-27 09:56 AM

Family is a great inspiration

Awesome job

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-06-28 06:54 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James

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