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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-30 03:32 PM



There
Still
In a corner
The white house

A black and white dog
Within a chain link fence
Late autumn
Withered grasses
A one car garage

Night
The moon
A lamp going on

A long red coat
Light brown hair

How I feel . . .
The falling snow

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-07-30 04:25 PM



Not what I anticipated...
but no one should be
surprised...

your works never are...
what is anticipated.

Just... more.


ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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2 posted 2005-07-31 11:31 PM


appreciate the snippits of information you use to tell a tale without filler..


Martie
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3 posted 2005-07-31 11:36 PM


Nice!
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4 posted 2005-08-07 10:57 AM


I'm with Sunshine on this one -- you always rattle the cage!

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froggy
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5 posted 2005-08-07 09:31 PM


Love it.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-27 12:15 PM


beautiful
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