Open Poetry #36 |
White House |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
There Still In a corner The white house A black and white dog Within a chain link fence Late autumn Withered grasses A one car garage Night The moon A lamp going on A long red coat Light brown hair How I feel . . . The falling snow http://www.juliesulzen.com/whitehouse.html |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not what I anticipated... but no one should be surprised... your works never are... what is anticipated. Just... more. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
appreciate the snippits of information you use to tell a tale without filler.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nice! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm with Sunshine on this one -- you always rattle the cage! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful |
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