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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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suddenly beneath this moon lantern lit behind the edge of darkness silence bangs louder than the speed of sound and my ears settle like dust uninterrupted |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXCELLENT Maree!!! Hugs YOU! Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I love this! I have read this poem several times and found a personal meaning in your words that I will indeed take with me. Patricia |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, for me too...understanding  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Indeed! Silence can be so loud! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, that dark quiet... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
thank you Ladies mxx |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I just told someone in another reply, that I'm picking my poems with utmost care tonight, but that I have no idea whatsoever why I'm actually choosing the ones I do.... Still batting a thousand, but I doknow why I chose this one. It's because Dark Angel is someone I like a lot, who also happens to be an extraordinarily good poet....of course! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lantern lit behind the edge of darkness HOTTTT ohhh yeah |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
publish. that is all okay and some hugs bella |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i loveth you maree. you make me feel things i forget about. keeping this! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
a gentle push back to the top, too good to be missed i think.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you gemma for bringing this beauty back up. Maree, this is excellent! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
silence is golden and TG this was bumped. How in the heck was this missed? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
had to reply again, this one should never have been lost as it was. hugs bellissima |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maree, you speak loudly with soft words! Terrific writing! Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and smile...tonight I have esbat too... sounds like you did too. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"silence bangs louder than the speed of sound" "silence bangs..." outstanding..because it's true.. glad this got pushed back to the top..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
back to the top, just cuz I miss reading you so damn much.... HUGS Bella. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sometimes words can cause one to collapse..maybe, mentally, i have. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Your silence was golden.......paul shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Can you hear it? the clapping of my heart? Nicely done Maree... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A thunderclap of silence... as only you can describe |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Maree the silence is beautiful....hugsss you Happy Holidays |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Phenomenal, Maree. Simply phenomenal. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
"and my ears settle like dust uninterrupted" i don't know why but these lines triggered strange emotions. great write |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Looks like we all know the sound of silence but it took a mind like yours to write it down. Terrific, Martyjo |
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