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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
From a Dream last May... ~*~ Odin Sounds Thunder woke dawn with light of its own making, deep, unrelenting crescendos vibrating paned windows as fingered endings were left needing... you drew a note on the redwoods, as I lifted my dreams from a Viking sun, who had slipped real between the leaves of memory, as Odin welcomed me again. You stray, but not so far as a slip of white desire left crumpled in a corner and I wonder if you feel this tremble of light, of me, beneath your skin. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling at the beauty in this.... lovely write lady in white... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yep.. love it when the Lady in White writes..  very sweetly pretty.... better than my dream of the week about Zombies.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was beautiful and so picturesque in its brevity. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Listen to your dreams...they are very often doors into the truth. So good to see you posting, Lady!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as a slip of white desire left that was beautiful, as is the entire poem especially loved this... and I wonder if you feel this tremble of light, of me, beneath your skin. beautiful...and Martie is so right... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I wonder if you feel this tremble of light, of me, beneath your skin. How very beautiful.... it's good to see you posting! *S* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Magical. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah yes dear Lady...you do know the way to my heart...writings such as this...Perhaps a mingling of words might be in order soon? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice dear Lady... It's so good to read you again. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Love dreamscapes. Wish I could remember more of mine so that I could record them. So danged ephemeral! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Sweet dreams, Lady. I wish I had dreams such as this. My dreams are the quilted version...fragments of this and that sewn together with no pattern or consistency. Beautifully written. Pat |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
and I wonder if you feel this tremble of light, of me, beneath your skin. And I wonder how it could possibly be otherwise! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms white you would be a fine tattoo enjoyed this flavor |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, lady, what an enjoyably smoothe read |
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